Post by Deleted on May 9, 2016 19:16:35 GMT -5
Finally, I got off my lazy ass and decided to make a thread for this! You guys know what to do - read and vote!
Original the Character
A young man swung his glaive around, taking down a few training dummies by just barely knocking their heads off. He had been training for about two hours on end, and it was starting to show. He was very sweaty by now, the fabric of his baggy, green gi sticking to his body. His dirty blonde hair fell over his eyes a little, limiting his already dulled senses as his exhaustion began to take its toll. To his left a bigger dummy jumped at him, and the large beetle on his left arm flew at it. The bug's horn impaled the puppet's chest, but didn't destroy it: all it actually did was launch it backwards, giving the young man more time to jump up and strike the thing's head with all his might, the blade on the glaive's head embedding itself in what would have been the dummy's skull.
"Enough." His teacher suddenly said as she clapped her hands twice, which caused all of the dummies still standing to collapse. The woman had been watching the entire training session from the shadows, and she had only taken her eyes off to take notes once every so often. "You're improving a lot, Glint." She stepped out into the light and took a look at her notes, tapping her pen against it briefly.
"Y-you were watching? My apologies, master Imu!" The young man said as he was trying to pull out the glaive, which was now lodged in the dummy's head. As he pulled it out, he noticed that its blade had dulled a lot during the training. He cursed under his breath, not having the discipline for weapon maintenance yet.
"Did you really expect to get away with using the school's training dummies without anyone noticing?" She said, her smile glowing as brightly as her forehead. As she was speaking, the red bug visibly struggled to remove its horn. But using the full force of its small wings it managed to pull out and tear a chunk of wood out with it. It quickly walked a circle on the dummy's chest, before flying back at its master. "Now, let's see... Your movements are sloppy, your stamina is lacking, and you do not appear to be fully aware of your surroundings at all times." Her tone shifted a little when stating that last issue, annoyed that he was looking at his spirit animal as she was talking. "That being said, your technique is rapidly improving. Avoid tactical mistakes like getting your weapon stuck, however. When it is time, play on your strengths. For now, aim to lessen your weaknesses."
"Yes, ma'am!" Glint said, the large beetle now sitting on his head. It disappeared in a puff of smoke like any other familiar a few seconds later, as the danger from training had passed now. His teacher disappeared in a puff of smoke as well, and Glint decided to go back to the ninja room. Over there his best friend and senior from the third year was drawing something. Deciding not to interrupt, Glint simply stepped into the bathroom to shower and untransformed back into his uniform, after which he promptly undressed.
In the shower, he began to think. If what his senior had told him the other day was correct, then the people running the good and evil schools were on friendly terms. Is that how the yearly festival could work out? If the principals hated one another such a thing couldn't be organised, but then why did they play along with the labels of "good" and "evil"? It simply didn't make sense to him. Still, he did know that he wanted to do his best.
A few years ago, when playing in the forest, he had been attacked by some... thing. He couldn't describe it, but he fully remembered the countless eyes on its body glaring at him all at once, freezing him in place as his sense of fight or flight failed him. If it weren't for a powerful and intimidating woman killing the creature before his eyes, he knew he wouldn't be standing here. It was then that he realised he had to become as strong as he could be. He wanted to train, even if he would never be able to reach that woman's level.
Washing his hair thoroughly, he thought about the rules again. The idea was that the strongest student of each class from each of the participating schools would have to team up, with the twelve students trying to land a blow on a powerful independant friend of the principals. Those who managed to land a blow would be given a chance to train with the best for a day. He felt privileged being the one to represent Hebijo Clandestine Academy's first class, even if he lagged far behind his seniors from the second and third year. Still, he was going to train endlessly, not wanting to waste his chance to get closer to his goal. If he failed this time he might still be able to succeed in his next two years, but he wanted to leave as little to luck as possible.
Stepping out and drying himself off, he sighed. "I wonder if I'll ever get to thank her...?" he thought out loud, stretching a little in front of the bathroom mirror.
About two months later, fireworks were going off in a massive shinobi barrier at Hanzõ Academy, the host of this year's festival. A middle aged man in a bright red outfit (that would have been fancy if it weren't for the bright colour) and mask was shouting into a mic to explain what events were going to be held today, but Glint wasn't paying attention. Behind him he vaguely heard rumours being spoken about how Hebijo became a gender neutral school because the principal was tired of being the most masculine person in the school (which he didn't really believe, even if she was a very handsome lady), and he could hear the fizzling sound of obscure foods being prepared to his right. However, he started paying full attention when his best friend ruffled his hair, after which the taller guy signalled him to listen up. His friend lifted the short shinobi up on his shoulders, allowing him to see what was going on for himself.
"And now, for the main event! The elites of each class from the four schools shall work together to try and stand a chance against one of the most powerful warriors out there! Those who prove themselves worthy shall receive a week's worth of special training to rise above their current potential!" The odd man in red shouted.
In the middle of the large sports field, Glint saw who he was going to be fighting. His eyes widened as he saw the extremely long, black hair and the clothing that was best described as being somewhere between a beautiful dress and an old-fashioned school uniform. Knowing that it was the lady that saved his life back then, he steeled himself. He knew he didn't stand a chance to actually win, but if he could at least prove himself...
Original the Character
A young man swung his glaive around, taking down a few training dummies by just barely knocking their heads off. He had been training for about two hours on end, and it was starting to show. He was very sweaty by now, the fabric of his baggy, green gi sticking to his body. His dirty blonde hair fell over his eyes a little, limiting his already dulled senses as his exhaustion began to take its toll. To his left a bigger dummy jumped at him, and the large beetle on his left arm flew at it. The bug's horn impaled the puppet's chest, but didn't destroy it: all it actually did was launch it backwards, giving the young man more time to jump up and strike the thing's head with all his might, the blade on the glaive's head embedding itself in what would have been the dummy's skull.
"Enough." His teacher suddenly said as she clapped her hands twice, which caused all of the dummies still standing to collapse. The woman had been watching the entire training session from the shadows, and she had only taken her eyes off to take notes once every so often. "You're improving a lot, Glint." She stepped out into the light and took a look at her notes, tapping her pen against it briefly.
"Y-you were watching? My apologies, master Imu!" The young man said as he was trying to pull out the glaive, which was now lodged in the dummy's head. As he pulled it out, he noticed that its blade had dulled a lot during the training. He cursed under his breath, not having the discipline for weapon maintenance yet.
"Did you really expect to get away with using the school's training dummies without anyone noticing?" She said, her smile glowing as brightly as her forehead. As she was speaking, the red bug visibly struggled to remove its horn. But using the full force of its small wings it managed to pull out and tear a chunk of wood out with it. It quickly walked a circle on the dummy's chest, before flying back at its master. "Now, let's see... Your movements are sloppy, your stamina is lacking, and you do not appear to be fully aware of your surroundings at all times." Her tone shifted a little when stating that last issue, annoyed that he was looking at his spirit animal as she was talking. "That being said, your technique is rapidly improving. Avoid tactical mistakes like getting your weapon stuck, however. When it is time, play on your strengths. For now, aim to lessen your weaknesses."
"Yes, ma'am!" Glint said, the large beetle now sitting on his head. It disappeared in a puff of smoke like any other familiar a few seconds later, as the danger from training had passed now. His teacher disappeared in a puff of smoke as well, and Glint decided to go back to the ninja room. Over there his best friend and senior from the third year was drawing something. Deciding not to interrupt, Glint simply stepped into the bathroom to shower and untransformed back into his uniform, after which he promptly undressed.
In the shower, he began to think. If what his senior had told him the other day was correct, then the people running the good and evil schools were on friendly terms. Is that how the yearly festival could work out? If the principals hated one another such a thing couldn't be organised, but then why did they play along with the labels of "good" and "evil"? It simply didn't make sense to him. Still, he did know that he wanted to do his best.
A few years ago, when playing in the forest, he had been attacked by some... thing. He couldn't describe it, but he fully remembered the countless eyes on its body glaring at him all at once, freezing him in place as his sense of fight or flight failed him. If it weren't for a powerful and intimidating woman killing the creature before his eyes, he knew he wouldn't be standing here. It was then that he realised he had to become as strong as he could be. He wanted to train, even if he would never be able to reach that woman's level.
Washing his hair thoroughly, he thought about the rules again. The idea was that the strongest student of each class from each of the participating schools would have to team up, with the twelve students trying to land a blow on a powerful independant friend of the principals. Those who managed to land a blow would be given a chance to train with the best for a day. He felt privileged being the one to represent Hebijo Clandestine Academy's first class, even if he lagged far behind his seniors from the second and third year. Still, he was going to train endlessly, not wanting to waste his chance to get closer to his goal. If he failed this time he might still be able to succeed in his next two years, but he wanted to leave as little to luck as possible.
Stepping out and drying himself off, he sighed. "I wonder if I'll ever get to thank her...?" he thought out loud, stretching a little in front of the bathroom mirror.
About two months later, fireworks were going off in a massive shinobi barrier at Hanzõ Academy, the host of this year's festival. A middle aged man in a bright red outfit (that would have been fancy if it weren't for the bright colour) and mask was shouting into a mic to explain what events were going to be held today, but Glint wasn't paying attention. Behind him he vaguely heard rumours being spoken about how Hebijo became a gender neutral school because the principal was tired of being the most masculine person in the school (which he didn't really believe, even if she was a very handsome lady), and he could hear the fizzling sound of obscure foods being prepared to his right. However, he started paying full attention when his best friend ruffled his hair, after which the taller guy signalled him to listen up. His friend lifted the short shinobi up on his shoulders, allowing him to see what was going on for himself.
"And now, for the main event! The elites of each class from the four schools shall work together to try and stand a chance against one of the most powerful warriors out there! Those who prove themselves worthy shall receive a week's worth of special training to rise above their current potential!" The odd man in red shouted.
In the middle of the large sports field, Glint saw who he was going to be fighting. His eyes widened as he saw the extremely long, black hair and the clothing that was best described as being somewhere between a beautiful dress and an old-fashioned school uniform. Knowing that it was the lady that saved his life back then, he steeled himself. He knew he didn't stand a chance to actually win, but if he could at least prove himself...
Red and Pink
"Yay! The park! The park!" Hibari, my adorably childish (and busty) girlfriend, cheered, as she gazed at everything in the amusement park.
I promised Hibari I would take her to the park should she do well on her next assignment. Surprisingly, she did very well. Whether it was because of the opportunity to go to the park, or spend a day with me, her newly appointed boyfriend, her motivation certainly contributed to her success.
My name is Akai. I'm fairly tall, I have red hair and fair complexion. I'm a second year of Hanzo Academy, and I just transferred. I'm also one of the Academy's rare male Shinobi, and a highly skilled one at that. But, I know for a fact that I can hardly hold a candle to the third year elites, Ikagura and Katsuragi, or even the first year, Yagyu, who's a prodigy. I can barely be a match for second year Asuka.
But then, among the Academy elite five, Hibari, the one known to be the weakest of the five, has always peaked my interest. Actually, I was more than just interested, I immediately fell in love at first sight. She's just so cute and innocent, it was far more effective than any weapon thrown at me. While the girls were more than welcoming to me in the Shinobi Training Course, Hibari was the most open of all of them, always greeting me with a smile, and supporting me when I needed it, and that's probably where my interest in her sprang.
However, I knew that my duties as a ninja came first before pursue my feelings, so I made sure to keep my friendship with her platonic.
But, one day, in a shocking turn of events, Hibari was the one to confess that she had a crush on me for a while, but was too shy to say anything, not even to her best friend Yagyu. Relieved that Hibari felt the same as I did, I told her I liked her too and asked her to be my girlfriend on the spot, to which she happily agreed. With that, my relationship with her developed rapidly. Everyone has been supportive of us so far.
Now to the present, Hibari and I are at the amusement park as promised.
"Akai-kun, let's go, let's go! We have so many rides to try and so many sweets to eat!" Hibari tugged my arm in an urge to try as many rides and eat as many candies as possible. She wears a fluffy pink shirt, hot red short skirt, and a pair of white flat boots.
"Don't pull so hard. We have all day to have fun." I said to Hibari, as we walk along a path through, while she skips ahead. Sometimes, it feels like I have a little sister then a girlfriend. "If you get too excited, you trip and fall on your face, like you always do."
"That's rude." Hibari scolded, furrowing her eyebrows. "I won't always trip and fall on-" just as she said it, she tripped and fell over on her face, despite there being nothing for her to trip on.
"Owwy..." she whimpered, sobbing somewhat from the pain in her nose.
"See what I mean? You okay?" I ask Hibari, concern for her in my voice. Hibari sat up and looked at me, with tears in her eyes.
"I-I'm okay..." she murmured, clearly trying to hold back the tears.
I bite your lower lip, trying my hardest control the urge fawn on her. She's just too cute, it gets to me in the heart. That baby face and slender form are just too potent a combination. Sadly, my excitement died down when I feel a chill run down my spine. I sensed the presence of blood lust no too far away.
Meanwhile, Hibari takes notice of my disturbed expression. Obviously, she's not aware of the blood lust that I sensed. "What's wrong, Akai-kun?" Hibari asked, with a worried look.
"It's nothing." I answered, with a reassuring expression. I offer a hand to help her up. "Let's get going, shall we?"
"Yeah! Let's!" she smiled, accepting my hand. After pulling her up, we march forward, though I look back and see Yagyu from a distance, glaring at me with an intense desire to kill me. Behind her are the rest of the girls, watching closely, but not with the same bloodlust as Yagyu. No doubt, they're following us to make sure nothing goes wrong on our date. Either that, or they're more worried about me and Hibari doing something we shouldn't. Spying on us, and not giving us privacy, where's the trust here? Shouldn't they know I wouldn't take advantage of Hibari? Or maybe, Asuka,
Ikagura, and Katsuragi are just there to keep Yagyu on a leash.
It's not hard to see the jealousy in her eyes.
It's going to be hard trying to ignore them, now that they've made their presence known to me.
Anyway, things are going smoothly. I bought Hibari treats, like ice cream, and cotton candy. We robe a roller coaster. She enjoyed, but I don't think I'll be riding one after a while. Riding a roller coaster can be good training for ones nerves, but there's a natural limit to how much one can take moving at such high speed.
We went on the spinning tea cups ride, which was fun until the constant spinning disagreed with my stomach after getting off. Hibari naturally remained fine.
After walking for a bit, Hibari and I come across a haunted house attraction, which Hibari evidently lead me to.
"Uh, Hibari, why are we here?" I ask her.
"W-Well, Katsu-nee said we should go here…" said a shaking Hibari. Obviously, she's afraid of going in.
"Why would Katsuragi suggest we come here?"
"B-Because, it's a couple thing and it's fun! E-Especially for the boy in the r-relationship!"
"Sounds to me like you're having loads of fun." I said sarcastically. I glance at the corner of my eye to see the girls tailing us, hiding behind a lamppost and some bushes. I can see Katsuragi snickering, while Ikagura facepalms. Is Katsuragi trying to big my grave further than ever? Yagyu looks more pissed now.
Anyway, we stroll on through the haunted house, which is actually pretty big. And dark. We run into plenty of ghouls and ghost on our way. I'm totally fine, but Hibari… let's just say she has a good set of lungs, as proven when she screams in terror at the sight of a ghost, zombie, or some form of apparition.
Not to mention, she's giving my arm a workout. She continuously clings to my arm, innocently pressing her breasts against me as she tightens her grip. So this is the fun Katsuragi was talking about.
We're passing a narrow hallway now. A really narrow hallway.
"W-We're almost out, right?! We'll be out soon, right?! Right?!"
"Yeah, I think we're about at the halfway point. Just be patient." I said, much to her dismay. As surprisingly refreshing as it is to see Hibari freak out, I'd prefer to get out as quickly as possible myself. I have a feeling someone besides Yagyu and the others stalking us. It's not them this time, though. They aren't Shinobi of any kind, otherwise they'd do a better job of masking their presence. They are quick, though. My sense aren't as sharp as the others, but I can tell he's somewhere.
"Kya!" Hibari pushes herself into me in surprise.
"Whoa! What's wrong?"
"Akai-kun, I f-f-felt something brush up against me…!"
"Like… what exactly…" I thoroughly doubt it's her imagination at this point.
"It… it… f-felt like a hand… touching my thigh…"
Thought so. The guy stalking us. Probably some ne'er-do-well trying to cop a feel.
"Kyaah!" Hibari jumps again, this time hugging me tightly, tears in her eyes and all. "T-T-This time, it touched my butt!"
Okay, this has gone long enough. I'm officially pissed. Even she must know it's not some phony ghost.
Trying to ignore the pleasant sensation of her breasts pressed against me, and her sweet smell, and her soft voice whimpering, I look for the groper as quick as possible.
This pervert must be using the dark as a cover, and he must be hiding the walls, which have some holes in them. Very clever. If he was a ninja assassin, he's be very good at his job. But, he's using the walls to grope my girlfriend. Luckily, my eyes have been trained to see in the dark.
I quickly spot the mystery hand slowly moving out of a hole in the wall to grope Hibari again. It's not Katsuragi's, and judging from the thickness, it's definitively a guy.
While Hibari isn't looking, I swiftly grab the hand moving towards Hibari again to grope her a third time, and give it a 'gentle' squeeze. 'Gentle' enough to pop it out of place. I let go, and the hand pulls back into the wall. I heard a faint pained groan as it went.
Don't worry, buddy. You'll be able to pop it back in after an hour or so.
"Hibari, let's run!" I suggest to her.
"Huh? O-Okay…" before anything could be said, I grab Hibari's hand and dash forward. We reach the exit after all the running.
"I-It should be… safe now…" I breath heavily.
"U-Um… Akai-kun…"
"Huh?" I notice I'm still holding her hand, and her shy reaction to it. I smile to myself, thinking how cute she is.
The sun is beginning to set. The day's almost over.
Giving her hand a genuinely gentle squeeze, I give her a reassuring smile, "It's getting pretty late. How about one last ride."
"Y-Yeah…" Hibari nods, smiling cutely.
For the last ride of the day, we went to the Ferris wheel. The Ferris wheel gives me a chance to relax, and let's Hibari take her mind of what happened in the haunted house.
I see her facing the window, still a little shaken from the excitement earlier. "You alright, Hibari?"
"Yeah… but, that was… really scary…" she answers sadly, but she perks up and looks me straight in the eyes, "But, you protected me, didn't you?"
"Of course, I did. I am your boyfriend, you know." I don't know if she saw what I did to that bastard, but what really matters is that she's safe and happy. That's all good for me.
"Yeah, thank you. I had a lot of fun today." Hibari said, now feeling better. She looks back to the window. Thanks to the slow movement, we were able to enjoy the scenery of the amusement park. I quietly gaze at Hibari as she looks out the window, taking in said scenery with a joyful smile. I smile to myself too, thinking how nice it is to see that bright smile on her.
Of course, it only lasted briefly upon seeing Yagyu's face firmly planted against the window of the car midway above us. Hibari was facing me so she didn't see her or the others in that same car.
"They really suck the fun out of everything, don't they…?"
"Hm?"
"Oh, nothing."
After the Ferris wheel ride, we quietly trek back to the entrance of the amusement park, while holding hands. Hibari suddenly stops, though.
"Something wrong, Hibari?"
"W-Well…" Hibari mumbled, "Akai-kun… I…"
I wait patiently for her.
"That is… I…" looks like Hibari couldn't muster the courage the ask. But, I understand her feelings. After all, they're the same feelings I have.
"Hibari…" I tenderly place my hands on her shoulders. Understanding my intent, she smiles and closes her eyes, waiting for me to do the deed. My heart is pounding like crazy right now, but without hesitation, I slowly move in and gently kiss her on the lips. We stayed that way, lips locked, for a brief moment, before parting.
"Hehe…" Hibari giggles happily, now that I've fulfilled her wish. If only I could be as happy, because whatever happiness I had died a horror death.
A giant red tentacle suddenly lurched out from the bushes. "You bastard… you stole… Hibari's… Hibari's…!" growled the voice of Yagyu, oozing with bloodlust. She slowly emerges from the bush she was hiding in. Trying to hold her down are Asuka, Ikagura, and Katsuragi.
"Yagyu-chan, calm down! He's her boyfriend now, so it should be okay!"
"Yeah, no need to get pissed over it!"
"Yagyu-san, your bloodlust is over 9000!"
I can only stand there frozen at the horrible sight I'm seeing. A seething Yagyu, with berserker tears, and a squid tentacle wriggling from her once covered eye. Only Hibari's voice called me back from my fear induced trance, "Yagyu-chan?! Asuka-chan, Katsu-nee, and Ikagura?! Why are they all…?"
"Hibari, let's run, now!"
"Eh?" without another word, I quickly take Hibari's hand and run as fast as my legs can carry me, followed closely by a confused Hibari.
"You won't escape!" Yagyu's voice echoed in my ears.
"Akai-kun, run fast, okay?! We can only hold her so long!"
"Book it man, your life depends on it!"
No need to tell twice. I'm gone.
The End
Commando Time
Commando time!
One day at Hebijoushi school…
“...Kun! Hakuun!” A voice calls Hakuun while sleeping.
“Hmm…Kinshaya? Is it already morning?”
“Of course it is! Now hurry up! Everybody is waiting for you!”
“Ok ok…”
Hakuun got ready fast because today they have to visit Hanzo’s school, their rivals, but she finds out a terrible thing.
“Damn baka-nee! She has stolen my panties again!” Murakumo, after she knew that Hakuun was her little sis, she became a huge siscon. So she steals her panties from time to time.
“I have no choice but going commando! I hope no one will notice!” And with that Hakuun reaches her friends.
“Girls I’m here! Sorry for being so late!”
“Geez Hakucchi! We have been waitin for you for so long!”
“Sorry Karen I was a little… busy… Anyways let’s go!”
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“Hey Kaminari open up! It’s us!” Hakuun shouts.
“Hey Hakuun-chan! It has been a while!” Kaminari goes immediately to hug her girlfriend. “You took a while, what happened?”
“…Nothing I just overslept.”
“Hmm… you don’t look very good… did something happen babe?” Says Kaminari getting closer to her.
“I told you I’m fine.”
“If you say so…”
“HEY GIRLS! How’re ya all? I’ve cooked nice things for all of ya!” Shouts Aki, the big girl of Hanzo.
“Hey Akki! I’m totes fine! Who’s my bestie? You’re my bestie!”
“Oh how cute. It’s easy to see that you’re best friends since you were little, but Karen-chan, Aki-chan is all mine~” Kosuke hugs Aki from the behind.
“Kosuke-chan! Look I did takoyaki! They looks delicious don’t they?”
“Yeah they sure do- wait. Again takoyaki? You never get bored with them?”
“Ofsh courshe nout!” Said Aki while stuffing her mouth with takoyakis.
“Hi girls. You have gotten very thin Hakuun I can even fit you in a hand.”
“Be-Benihime-chan… that’s a broom.” Says Kaminari.
“Oh...”
<<benihime is="" blind="" so="" sometimes="" this="" mistakes="" happens.="" eh?="">> Hakuun thought to herself.
“Benihime-saaaaaannn!!!! I have missed you! Oh? Not wearing panties again eh? How naughty~”
“Kinshaya-san please stop it. Mayuko-san will get mad if you continue any further.”
“Mayuko?”
“Yes me!”
“Eeeek!!! Ma-Mayuko! Forgive me!”
Mayuko hits Kinshaya.
“Haha things like this happens if you continue this Kin-chin!”
“Karen-chaaaaaannnn!!!!”
“Oh! Ryukaaaaa!!!! My love!!! I’ve missed you so much!!!!”
“Benihime-san…”
“Yuhi-san…”
“Hey hey girls. We haven’t meet to flirt with each other. Do you remember that we have to training?” Says Hakuun a little annoyed.
“Hakuun-chan is right! C’mon girls! Let’s start!”
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While training…
“Hiden Ninpo! Kazekiri!”
“Ugh! Not bad Hakuun-chan but it isn’t over yet!”
With a fast movement Kaminari gets behind Hakuun and hits her.
“Itta! Now I’m pissed off! Take this!”
Hakuun swings her scythe against the blonde which with her claws blocks the attack.
“Hakuun-chan you have lowered your guard!”
“What!?”
Kaminari slashes her lower part of the costume reveling that she was on commando.
“Ha-Ha-Hakuun-chan!?” Kaminari blushes furiously.
“Ohhhhh!!!! Hakuun is on commando!!!! I need to take a photo~” Says Kinshaya very excited.
“Ah-Ah-Ah- AHHHHHHHHH!!!!!” Hakuun shouts.
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“Hahaha! You had to see your face! It was priceless!” Says Kaminari mocking Hakuun.
“Shut up Bakaminari!” Says Hakuun blushing.
“You’re so cute when you’re like this~” Kaminari hugs Hakuun.
“Geez... you’re just so stupid sometimes.”
“Hey now who’s flirting?”
“Shut up Kinshaya. We haven’t ask you anything.”
“That’s so mean Hakuun!”
“Anyways we have to go. Dougen-sama is waitin for us at the Hebijou.”
“Oh… alrighty… Hakuun-chan.”
“Wh-what Kaminari?”
“Next time remember to wear panties!”
“F*ck you Kaminari!”
And with that the girls came back their schools laughing loudly.</benihime>
"Yay! The park! The park!" Hibari, my adorably childish (and busty) girlfriend, cheered, as she gazed at everything in the amusement park.
I promised Hibari I would take her to the park should she do well on her next assignment. Surprisingly, she did very well. Whether it was because of the opportunity to go to the park, or spend a day with me, her newly appointed boyfriend, her motivation certainly contributed to her success.
My name is Akai. I'm fairly tall, I have red hair and fair complexion. I'm a second year of Hanzo Academy, and I just transferred. I'm also one of the Academy's rare male Shinobi, and a highly skilled one at that. But, I know for a fact that I can hardly hold a candle to the third year elites, Ikagura and Katsuragi, or even the first year, Yagyu, who's a prodigy. I can barely be a match for second year Asuka.
But then, among the Academy elite five, Hibari, the one known to be the weakest of the five, has always peaked my interest. Actually, I was more than just interested, I immediately fell in love at first sight. She's just so cute and innocent, it was far more effective than any weapon thrown at me. While the girls were more than welcoming to me in the Shinobi Training Course, Hibari was the most open of all of them, always greeting me with a smile, and supporting me when I needed it, and that's probably where my interest in her sprang.
However, I knew that my duties as a ninja came first before pursue my feelings, so I made sure to keep my friendship with her platonic.
But, one day, in a shocking turn of events, Hibari was the one to confess that she had a crush on me for a while, but was too shy to say anything, not even to her best friend Yagyu. Relieved that Hibari felt the same as I did, I told her I liked her too and asked her to be my girlfriend on the spot, to which she happily agreed. With that, my relationship with her developed rapidly. Everyone has been supportive of us so far.
Now to the present, Hibari and I are at the amusement park as promised.
"Akai-kun, let's go, let's go! We have so many rides to try and so many sweets to eat!" Hibari tugged my arm in an urge to try as many rides and eat as many candies as possible. She wears a fluffy pink shirt, hot red short skirt, and a pair of white flat boots.
"Don't pull so hard. We have all day to have fun." I said to Hibari, as we walk along a path through, while she skips ahead. Sometimes, it feels like I have a little sister then a girlfriend. "If you get too excited, you trip and fall on your face, like you always do."
"That's rude." Hibari scolded, furrowing her eyebrows. "I won't always trip and fall on-" just as she said it, she tripped and fell over on her face, despite there being nothing for her to trip on.
"Owwy..." she whimpered, sobbing somewhat from the pain in her nose.
"See what I mean? You okay?" I ask Hibari, concern for her in my voice. Hibari sat up and looked at me, with tears in her eyes.
"I-I'm okay..." she murmured, clearly trying to hold back the tears.
I bite your lower lip, trying my hardest control the urge fawn on her. She's just too cute, it gets to me in the heart. That baby face and slender form are just too potent a combination. Sadly, my excitement died down when I feel a chill run down my spine. I sensed the presence of blood lust no too far away.
Meanwhile, Hibari takes notice of my disturbed expression. Obviously, she's not aware of the blood lust that I sensed. "What's wrong, Akai-kun?" Hibari asked, with a worried look.
"It's nothing." I answered, with a reassuring expression. I offer a hand to help her up. "Let's get going, shall we?"
"Yeah! Let's!" she smiled, accepting my hand. After pulling her up, we march forward, though I look back and see Yagyu from a distance, glaring at me with an intense desire to kill me. Behind her are the rest of the girls, watching closely, but not with the same bloodlust as Yagyu. No doubt, they're following us to make sure nothing goes wrong on our date. Either that, or they're more worried about me and Hibari doing something we shouldn't. Spying on us, and not giving us privacy, where's the trust here? Shouldn't they know I wouldn't take advantage of Hibari? Or maybe, Asuka,
Ikagura, and Katsuragi are just there to keep Yagyu on a leash.
It's not hard to see the jealousy in her eyes.
It's going to be hard trying to ignore them, now that they've made their presence known to me.
Anyway, things are going smoothly. I bought Hibari treats, like ice cream, and cotton candy. We robe a roller coaster. She enjoyed, but I don't think I'll be riding one after a while. Riding a roller coaster can be good training for ones nerves, but there's a natural limit to how much one can take moving at such high speed.
We went on the spinning tea cups ride, which was fun until the constant spinning disagreed with my stomach after getting off. Hibari naturally remained fine.
After walking for a bit, Hibari and I come across a haunted house attraction, which Hibari evidently lead me to.
"Uh, Hibari, why are we here?" I ask her.
"W-Well, Katsu-nee said we should go here…" said a shaking Hibari. Obviously, she's afraid of going in.
"Why would Katsuragi suggest we come here?"
"B-Because, it's a couple thing and it's fun! E-Especially for the boy in the r-relationship!"
"Sounds to me like you're having loads of fun." I said sarcastically. I glance at the corner of my eye to see the girls tailing us, hiding behind a lamppost and some bushes. I can see Katsuragi snickering, while Ikagura facepalms. Is Katsuragi trying to big my grave further than ever? Yagyu looks more pissed now.
Anyway, we stroll on through the haunted house, which is actually pretty big. And dark. We run into plenty of ghouls and ghost on our way. I'm totally fine, but Hibari… let's just say she has a good set of lungs, as proven when she screams in terror at the sight of a ghost, zombie, or some form of apparition.
Not to mention, she's giving my arm a workout. She continuously clings to my arm, innocently pressing her breasts against me as she tightens her grip. So this is the fun Katsuragi was talking about.
We're passing a narrow hallway now. A really narrow hallway.
"W-We're almost out, right?! We'll be out soon, right?! Right?!"
"Yeah, I think we're about at the halfway point. Just be patient." I said, much to her dismay. As surprisingly refreshing as it is to see Hibari freak out, I'd prefer to get out as quickly as possible myself. I have a feeling someone besides Yagyu and the others stalking us. It's not them this time, though. They aren't Shinobi of any kind, otherwise they'd do a better job of masking their presence. They are quick, though. My sense aren't as sharp as the others, but I can tell he's somewhere.
"Kya!" Hibari pushes herself into me in surprise.
"Whoa! What's wrong?"
"Akai-kun, I f-f-felt something brush up against me…!"
"Like… what exactly…" I thoroughly doubt it's her imagination at this point.
"It… it… f-felt like a hand… touching my thigh…"
Thought so. The guy stalking us. Probably some ne'er-do-well trying to cop a feel.
"Kyaah!" Hibari jumps again, this time hugging me tightly, tears in her eyes and all. "T-T-This time, it touched my butt!"
Okay, this has gone long enough. I'm officially pissed. Even she must know it's not some phony ghost.
Trying to ignore the pleasant sensation of her breasts pressed against me, and her sweet smell, and her soft voice whimpering, I look for the groper as quick as possible.
This pervert must be using the dark as a cover, and he must be hiding the walls, which have some holes in them. Very clever. If he was a ninja assassin, he's be very good at his job. But, he's using the walls to grope my girlfriend. Luckily, my eyes have been trained to see in the dark.
I quickly spot the mystery hand slowly moving out of a hole in the wall to grope Hibari again. It's not Katsuragi's, and judging from the thickness, it's definitively a guy.
While Hibari isn't looking, I swiftly grab the hand moving towards Hibari again to grope her a third time, and give it a 'gentle' squeeze. 'Gentle' enough to pop it out of place. I let go, and the hand pulls back into the wall. I heard a faint pained groan as it went.
Don't worry, buddy. You'll be able to pop it back in after an hour or so.
"Hibari, let's run!" I suggest to her.
"Huh? O-Okay…" before anything could be said, I grab Hibari's hand and dash forward. We reach the exit after all the running.
"I-It should be… safe now…" I breath heavily.
"U-Um… Akai-kun…"
"Huh?" I notice I'm still holding her hand, and her shy reaction to it. I smile to myself, thinking how cute she is.
The sun is beginning to set. The day's almost over.
Giving her hand a genuinely gentle squeeze, I give her a reassuring smile, "It's getting pretty late. How about one last ride."
"Y-Yeah…" Hibari nods, smiling cutely.
For the last ride of the day, we went to the Ferris wheel. The Ferris wheel gives me a chance to relax, and let's Hibari take her mind of what happened in the haunted house.
I see her facing the window, still a little shaken from the excitement earlier. "You alright, Hibari?"
"Yeah… but, that was… really scary…" she answers sadly, but she perks up and looks me straight in the eyes, "But, you protected me, didn't you?"
"Of course, I did. I am your boyfriend, you know." I don't know if she saw what I did to that bastard, but what really matters is that she's safe and happy. That's all good for me.
"Yeah, thank you. I had a lot of fun today." Hibari said, now feeling better. She looks back to the window. Thanks to the slow movement, we were able to enjoy the scenery of the amusement park. I quietly gaze at Hibari as she looks out the window, taking in said scenery with a joyful smile. I smile to myself too, thinking how nice it is to see that bright smile on her.
Of course, it only lasted briefly upon seeing Yagyu's face firmly planted against the window of the car midway above us. Hibari was facing me so she didn't see her or the others in that same car.
"They really suck the fun out of everything, don't they…?"
"Hm?"
"Oh, nothing."
After the Ferris wheel ride, we quietly trek back to the entrance of the amusement park, while holding hands. Hibari suddenly stops, though.
"Something wrong, Hibari?"
"W-Well…" Hibari mumbled, "Akai-kun… I…"
I wait patiently for her.
"That is… I…" looks like Hibari couldn't muster the courage the ask. But, I understand her feelings. After all, they're the same feelings I have.
"Hibari…" I tenderly place my hands on her shoulders. Understanding my intent, she smiles and closes her eyes, waiting for me to do the deed. My heart is pounding like crazy right now, but without hesitation, I slowly move in and gently kiss her on the lips. We stayed that way, lips locked, for a brief moment, before parting.
"Hehe…" Hibari giggles happily, now that I've fulfilled her wish. If only I could be as happy, because whatever happiness I had died a horror death.
A giant red tentacle suddenly lurched out from the bushes. "You bastard… you stole… Hibari's… Hibari's…!" growled the voice of Yagyu, oozing with bloodlust. She slowly emerges from the bush she was hiding in. Trying to hold her down are Asuka, Ikagura, and Katsuragi.
"Yagyu-chan, calm down! He's her boyfriend now, so it should be okay!"
"Yeah, no need to get pissed over it!"
"Yagyu-san, your bloodlust is over 9000!"
I can only stand there frozen at the horrible sight I'm seeing. A seething Yagyu, with berserker tears, and a squid tentacle wriggling from her once covered eye. Only Hibari's voice called me back from my fear induced trance, "Yagyu-chan?! Asuka-chan, Katsu-nee, and Ikagura?! Why are they all…?"
"Hibari, let's run, now!"
"Eh?" without another word, I quickly take Hibari's hand and run as fast as my legs can carry me, followed closely by a confused Hibari.
"You won't escape!" Yagyu's voice echoed in my ears.
"Akai-kun, run fast, okay?! We can only hold her so long!"
"Book it man, your life depends on it!"
No need to tell twice. I'm gone.
The End
Commando Time
Commando time!
One day at Hebijoushi school…
“...Kun! Hakuun!” A voice calls Hakuun while sleeping.
“Hmm…Kinshaya? Is it already morning?”
“Of course it is! Now hurry up! Everybody is waiting for you!”
“Ok ok…”
Hakuun got ready fast because today they have to visit Hanzo’s school, their rivals, but she finds out a terrible thing.
“Damn baka-nee! She has stolen my panties again!” Murakumo, after she knew that Hakuun was her little sis, she became a huge siscon. So she steals her panties from time to time.
“I have no choice but going commando! I hope no one will notice!” And with that Hakuun reaches her friends.
“Girls I’m here! Sorry for being so late!”
“Geez Hakucchi! We have been waitin for you for so long!”
“Sorry Karen I was a little… busy… Anyways let’s go!”
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“Hey Kaminari open up! It’s us!” Hakuun shouts.
“Hey Hakuun-chan! It has been a while!” Kaminari goes immediately to hug her girlfriend. “You took a while, what happened?”
“…Nothing I just overslept.”
“Hmm… you don’t look very good… did something happen babe?” Says Kaminari getting closer to her.
“I told you I’m fine.”
“If you say so…”
“HEY GIRLS! How’re ya all? I’ve cooked nice things for all of ya!” Shouts Aki, the big girl of Hanzo.
“Hey Akki! I’m totes fine! Who’s my bestie? You’re my bestie!”
“Oh how cute. It’s easy to see that you’re best friends since you were little, but Karen-chan, Aki-chan is all mine~” Kosuke hugs Aki from the behind.
“Kosuke-chan! Look I did takoyaki! They looks delicious don’t they?”
“Yeah they sure do- wait. Again takoyaki? You never get bored with them?”
“Ofsh courshe nout!” Said Aki while stuffing her mouth with takoyakis.
“Hi girls. You have gotten very thin Hakuun I can even fit you in a hand.”
“Be-Benihime-chan… that’s a broom.” Says Kaminari.
“Oh...”
<<benihime is="" blind="" so="" sometimes="" this="" mistakes="" happens.="" eh?="">> Hakuun thought to herself.
“Benihime-saaaaaannn!!!! I have missed you! Oh? Not wearing panties again eh? How naughty~”
“Kinshaya-san please stop it. Mayuko-san will get mad if you continue any further.”
“Mayuko?”
“Yes me!”
“Eeeek!!! Ma-Mayuko! Forgive me!”
Mayuko hits Kinshaya.
“Haha things like this happens if you continue this Kin-chin!”
“Karen-chaaaaaannnn!!!!”
“Oh! Ryukaaaaa!!!! My love!!! I’ve missed you so much!!!!”
“Benihime-san…”
“Yuhi-san…”
“Hey hey girls. We haven’t meet to flirt with each other. Do you remember that we have to training?” Says Hakuun a little annoyed.
“Hakuun-chan is right! C’mon girls! Let’s start!”
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While training…
“Hiden Ninpo! Kazekiri!”
“Ugh! Not bad Hakuun-chan but it isn’t over yet!”
With a fast movement Kaminari gets behind Hakuun and hits her.
“Itta! Now I’m pissed off! Take this!”
Hakuun swings her scythe against the blonde which with her claws blocks the attack.
“Hakuun-chan you have lowered your guard!”
“What!?”
Kaminari slashes her lower part of the costume reveling that she was on commando.
“Ha-Ha-Hakuun-chan!?” Kaminari blushes furiously.
“Ohhhhh!!!! Hakuun is on commando!!!! I need to take a photo~” Says Kinshaya very excited.
“Ah-Ah-Ah- AHHHHHHHHH!!!!!” Hakuun shouts.
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“Hahaha! You had to see your face! It was priceless!” Says Kaminari mocking Hakuun.
“Shut up Bakaminari!” Says Hakuun blushing.
“You’re so cute when you’re like this~” Kaminari hugs Hakuun.
“Geez... you’re just so stupid sometimes.”
“Hey now who’s flirting?”
“Shut up Kinshaya. We haven’t ask you anything.”
“That’s so mean Hakuun!”
“Anyways we have to go. Dougen-sama is waitin for us at the Hebijou.”
“Oh… alrighty… Hakuun-chan.”
“Wh-what Kaminari?”
“Next time remember to wear panties!”
“F*ck you Kaminari!”
And with that the girls came back their schools laughing loudly.</benihime>