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Post by Dai-T on Jun 18, 2014 3:34:13 GMT -5
Well if this is the first one and you want to keep the into try to edit the intro of the girls and the schools down. You dont need to be so serious about this. Good ninja girls, bad ninja girls, boobs go. Lol
Oh tell the animators they did a great job. My fav pic is the lady walking by looking at yagyuu. So funny.
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Post by Poog on Jun 18, 2014 5:46:07 GMT -5
This was surprisingly enjoyable. I dont really have much criticism to offer as you covered the bases pretty well, but hey, the ever wonderful Dai apparently has you covered there.
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Post by cltheo on Jun 18, 2014 9:05:33 GMT -5
Well if this is the first one and you want to keep the into try to edit the intro of the girls and the schools down. You dont need to be so serious about this. Good ninja girls, bad ninja girls, boobs go. Lol Oh tell the animators they did a great job. My fav pic is the lady walking by looking at yagyuu. So funny. Makes the series sound like it has more than just fan service which I feel is true. I'll see what I can do. Got that covered as well in the anime part. shagami is awesome right?  p.s. my voice is sexy baby  |
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Post by cltheo on Jun 18, 2014 9:06:03 GMT -5
This was surprisingly enjoyable. I dont really have much criticism to offer as you covered the bases pretty well, but hey, the ever wonderful Dai apparently has you covered there. Surprisingly? >  |
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Post by Dai-T on Jun 18, 2014 11:32:08 GMT -5
Well if this is the first one and you want to keep the into try to edit the intro of the girls and the schools down. You dont need to be so serious about this. Good ninja girls, bad ninja girls, boobs go. Lol Oh tell the animators they did a great job. My fav pic is the lady walking by looking at yagyuu. So funny. Makes the series sound like it has more than just fan service which I feel is true. I'll see what I can do. Got that covered as well in the anime part. shagami is awesome right? p.s. my voice is sexy baby Idk the producer himself does not take the series serious thats why zens ads were so good it captured the idea of the producer if he made it. I think this is a series you let speak for it's self because most people go in and think one thing then they are surprised how good it is after they experience the games at least. |
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Post by Poog on Jun 18, 2014 13:03:11 GMT -5
This was surprisingly enjoyable. I dont really have much criticism to offer as you covered the bases pretty well, but hey, the ever wonderful Dai apparently has you covered there. Surprisingly? > I'm very cynical and assume fan-made content will bore me usually. Nothing personal. xD |
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Post by cltheo on Jun 18, 2014 14:55:06 GMT -5
Makes the series sound like it has more than just fan service which I feel is true. I'll see what I can do. Got that covered as well in the anime part. shagami is awesome right? p.s. my voice is sexy baby Idk the producer himself does not take the series serious thats why zens ads were so good it captured the idea of the producer if he made it. I think this is a series you let speak for it's self because most people go in and think one thing then they are surprised how good it is after they experience the games at least. I do agree but didn't this forum for the most part dislike the anime for the same reason? I'm just going by what I read on here at least. Also just realized you're a girl XD That gives me more incentive to sound sexier got to boost my internet ego. |
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Post by cltheo on Jun 18, 2014 14:55:41 GMT -5
Surprisingly? > I'm very cynical and assume fan-made content will bore me usually. Nothing personal. xD Glad to hear I impressed you! Anything I can do to impress you more? :3 |
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Post by Poog on Jun 18, 2014 15:01:02 GMT -5
I'm very cynical and assume fan-made content will bore me usually. Nothing personal. xD Glad to hear I impressed you! Anything I can do to impress you more? :3 The only thing I'd say is try to drag on about certain things a little bit less. Overall pretty solid dude. |
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Post by cltheo on Jun 18, 2014 16:46:03 GMT -5
Glad to hear I impressed you! Anything I can do to impress you more? :3 The only thing I'd say is try to drag on about certain things a little bit less. Overall pretty solid dude. Fixed that thanks to dai. I'll post the final vid when it's ready ! Subscribe for future surprisingly not bad fan made vids. :3 |
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Post by cltheo on Jun 24, 2014 18:58:37 GMT -5
New changes made! Let me know what you guys think now.
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Post by Dai-T on Jun 25, 2014 18:00:06 GMT -5
Can you tell me the changes besides the mention of SIA? still seems long and your not even finished. do you have an ending in mind?
I would cut the game mode bits like panty mode to fit your ending in there since it's already 8 minutes.
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Post by cltheo on Jun 25, 2014 21:08:42 GMT -5
I did what you said and re recorded the whole vid to make it sound clear. I cut a lot of small stuff that I can't remember. Sorry but there is no way to cut it down more. This isn't a review. It's an overview. I understand people have short intention spans but there's nothing more i can cut without making the content dwindle. People like you're friends aren't my target audience then I suppose :/ Also yeah it's all done. All I need are the pictures.
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Post by Dai-T on Jun 26, 2014 3:59:18 GMT -5
I see you don't want to cut stuff also because the artist may get mad I understand. This is your first one. Well I hope I helped a bit when going forward with others in the future.
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Post by cltheo on Jun 26, 2014 13:44:54 GMT -5
Definitely! My ore no imouto one is already cut a good chunk for the better thanks to your advice. My artists are real chill. Plus they still got paid in the end |
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