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Post by cltheo on Jun 17, 2014 1:34:08 GMT -5
EDIT:
After nearly a year in production, the video is finally complete! Yes I said a year. Long story short, it's been a crazy year. Give me your feedback and be sure to like and subscribe if you enjoyed! Thanks everyone for your feedback. This project has a tough one but thanks to my two associates and all your support, I pulled through and learned a lot about being a boss.
Enjoy and remember, Haruka is love! :3
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Post by Dai-T on Jun 17, 2014 3:49:25 GMT -5
I like it it's funny and the pics are so cute. I would suggest to edit the length. Either talk about the anime or the games. If you talk about the anime save that for last as you can breeze over alot.
What style are you going for entertainment or informative?
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Post by momo99 on Jun 17, 2014 7:24:41 GMT -5
This is the rough draft of my senran kagura overview vid. The reason it ends abruptly is because I only have about 3/4 of the pictures left. This vid is unlisted and will be taken down once I get the final pictures needed. Please give me feedback on what you think of it and remember, Haruka is love :3 Your draws are awesome (and your chibi too ^^) and your're a serious reviewer bit with a funny tone. I appreciated the fact you talked about Takagi and the otaku fanbase we're proud to be in. Wonderful job, can't wait for the one for Deep Crimson, Dekamori and Estival Versus
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Post by cltheo on Jun 17, 2014 10:47:03 GMT -5
I like it it's funny and the pics are so cute. I would suggest to edit the length. Either talk about the anime or the games. If you talk about the anime save that for last as you can breeze over alot. What style are you going for entertainment or informative? Well considering its an overview I felt the need to cover all the basics of the series. It's backstory (informative and gives the series more interest) the original debut (which are the games which is last like you said) the mangas (not the best way into the series but there's of mangos now) and the anime. Im going for informative but with enough humor to make it a fun listen. I'd love to cut it down more but I'm not sure what I can afford to cut since the series is pretty big now. the next vid on Ore no Imouto is much shorter since it doesn't have as many adaptations as Senran Kagura does.
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Post by cltheo on Jun 17, 2014 10:49:35 GMT -5
This is the rough draft of my senran kagura overview vid. The reason it ends abruptly is because I only have about 3/4 of the pictures left. This vid is unlisted and will be taken down once I get the final pictures needed. Please give me feedback on what you think of it and remember, Haruka is love :3 Your draws are awesome (and your chibi too ^^) and your're a serious reviewer bit with a funny tone. I appreciated the fact you talked about Takagi and the otaku fanbase we're proud to be in. Wonderful job, can't wait for the one for Deep Crimson, Dekamori and Estival Versus They were drawn by artists I hired. I give them a shout out at the end for doing such an awesome job! I'm actually Hispanic but when I asked them to fix the skin tone, I still ended up white! XD it wasn't a big deal so I left it.
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Post by h2foxo on Jun 17, 2014 13:11:47 GMT -5
I personally have no problem with length.
In fact i actually prefer overview/review videos to go over 10 minutes.
Not saying to do that for this, but i am saying that opinion on length is subjective.
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Post by cltheo on Jun 17, 2014 16:08:29 GMT -5
I personally have no problem with length. In fact i actually prefer overview/review videos to go over 10 minutes. Not saying to do that for this, but i am saying that opinion on length is subjective. Appreciate the feedback :3 Anything else you would like to add?
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Post by Leon Tekashi on Jun 17, 2014 16:53:04 GMT -5
Awesome video man. I'm looking forward to the final version.
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Post by Dai-T on Jun 17, 2014 17:34:17 GMT -5
I like it it's funny and the pics are so cute. I would suggest to edit the length. Either talk about the anime or the games. If you talk about the anime save that for last as you can breeze over alot. What style are you going for entertainment or informative? Well considering its an overview I felt the need to cover all the basics of the series. It's backstory (informative and gives the series more interest) the original debut (which are the games which is last like you said) the mangas (not the best way into the series but there's of mangos now) and the anime. Im going for informative but with enough humor to make it a fun listen. I'd love to cut it down more but I'm not sure what I can afford to cut since the series is pretty big now. the next vid on Ore no Imouto is much shorter since it doesn't have as many adaptations as Senran Kagura does. How are the other ones you make do they get alot of hits? I just worry about length because if you try and link it to someone they will not even open if they see it's too long. People have short attention and want the info faster if they are not entertained. Don't think I can link it to anyone who does not know the series that will watch it. Just does not move fast enough the way it is now. I'm not saying it's bad just I seen a pattern when it comes to people viewing new stuff even if it's good ifo.
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Post by cltheo on Jun 17, 2014 18:40:14 GMT -5
Well considering its an overview I felt the need to cover all the basics of the series. It's backstory (informative and gives the series more interest) the original debut (which are the games which is last like you said) the mangas (not the best way into the series but there's of mangos now) and the anime. Im going for informative but with enough humor to make it a fun listen. I'd love to cut it down more but I'm not sure what I can afford to cut since the series is pretty big now. the next vid on Ore no Imouto is much shorter since it doesn't have as many adaptations as Senran Kagura does. How are the other ones you make do they get alot of hits? I just worry about length because if you try and link it to someone they will not even open if they see it's too long. People have short attention and want the info faster if they are not entertained. Don't think I can link it to anyone who does not know the series that will watch it. Just does not move fast enough the way it is now. I'm not saying it's bad just I seen a pattern when it comes to people viewing new stuff even if it's good ifo. This is my first one. I also get where you're coming from. So any suggestions? You said before it was funny but now it's not funny enough to people entertained?
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Post by Dai-T on Jun 17, 2014 19:27:19 GMT -5
How are the other ones you make do they get alot of hits? I just worry about length because if you try and link it to someone they will not even open if they see it's too long. People have short attention and want the info faster if they are not entertained. Don't think I can link it to anyone who does not know the series that will watch it. Just does not move fast enough the way it is now. I'm not saying it's bad just I seen a pattern when it comes to people viewing new stuff even if it's good ifo. This is my first one. I also get where you're coming from. So any suggestions? You said before it was funny but now it's not funny enough to people entertained? It's funny to me because the cute pics and the cute jokes but it's not easy to get everyone to laugh and some people will enter waiting just to not laugh to say " lame" the key I heard is to move fast get the jokes in and move along quick so if the joke fails for that person you are already done. There is no way to know what eveyone likes so you have to start big to gain the viewers attention then just keep it moving. Don't throw to many winks and nods to the community that others won't get , that will break the flow. Take out the part about not playing the games. No one needs to know this. Were you concentrating on getting the right info out the whole time? You don't have to worry about that you can do a write up and link it , it's better you be comfortable with what you are saying. You seem to have fun when you was making jokes and doing your own take then when you was reading the info. Try to integrate the info in to your style while having fun. Make sure you are having fun all the time.
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Post by cltheo on Jun 17, 2014 21:48:17 GMT -5
This is my first one. I also get where you're coming from. So any suggestions? You said before it was funny but now it's not funny enough to people entertained? It's funny to me because the cute pics and the cute jokes but it's not easy to get everyone to laugh and some people will enter waiting just to not laugh to say " lame" the key I heard is to move fast get the jokes in and move along quick so if the joke fails for that person you are already done. There is no way to know what eveyone likes so you have to start big to gain the viewers attention then just keep it moving. Don't throw to many winks and nods to the community that others won't get , that will break the flow. Take out the part about not playing the games. No one needs to know this. Were you concentrating on getting the right info out the whole time? You don't have to worry about that you can do a write up and link it , it's better you be comfortable with what you are saying. You seem to have fun when you was making jokes and doing your own take then when you was reading the info. Try to integrate the info in to your style while having fun. Make sure you are having fun all the time. Took out about what you said but can you give examples of those winks?
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Post by Dai-T on Jun 17, 2014 22:37:23 GMT -5
It's funny to me because the cute pics and the cute jokes but it's not easy to get everyone to laugh and some people will enter waiting just to not laugh to say " lame" the key I heard is to move fast get the jokes in and move along quick so if the joke fails for that person you are already done. There is no way to know what eveyone likes so you have to start big to gain the viewers attention then just keep it moving. Don't throw to many winks and nods to the community that others won't get , that will break the flow. Take out the part about not playing the games. No one needs to know this. Were you concentrating on getting the right info out the whole time? You don't have to worry about that you can do a write up and link it , it's better you be comfortable with what you are saying. You seem to have fun when you was making jokes and doing your own take then when you was reading the info. Try to integrate the info in to your style while having fun. Make sure you are having fun all the time. Took out about what you said but can you give examples of those winks? Ok I just watched it again. You don't need to mention this site in the middle leave that last it breaks your flow. I dont know any of those naruto characters you mention. You can show the characters in animation like the dbz stuff just try not to name drop. Things like that should be visual only let the viewer make the connection. The MLP thing was good. Let some of the pics do the talking and get info across as long as the right picture is up the viewer will make the connection and be pulled in more. Take out the part about your speech just be confident. they hear what they hear don't apologies. If record again try to relax have fun take the stuff off the script reword it and memorize it that way your delivery is much smoother. If you want to make fun of your speech do it with the animation never say it.
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Post by cltheo on Jun 17, 2014 23:31:26 GMT -5
Took out about what you said but can you give examples of those winks? Ok I just watched it again. You don't need to mention this site in the middle leave that last it breaks your flow. I dont know any of those naruto characters you mention. You can show the characters in animation like the dbz stuff just try not to name drop. Things like that should be visual only let the viewer make the connection. The MLP thing was good. Let some of the pics do the talking and get info across as long as the right picture is up the viewer will make the connection and be pulled in more. Take out the part about your speech just be confident. they hear what they hear don't apologies. If record again try to relax have fun take the stuff off the script reword it and memorize it that way your delivery is much smoother. If you want to make fun of your speech do it with the animation never say it. Naruto is an anime I figured most have seen but you're right. As for the speech, I mostly brought it up so I could give a shootout to the two guys who are also helping me with this since its my first time. I was calm during the recordings but again the speech thing is something I'm working on. Any parts in particular that should be re recorded? also I forgot who asked but one of the moderators were hoping for a shootout so that's why that's in there. Edit: I went back and began redoing parts I slurred at, and it sounds so much better. I can take critics well, but hearing you be critical about it made me somehow subconsciously slow down my words. I'm speaking so much clearer and am articulating my words. So thanks for that! Seriously it came out of nowhere and it's amazing! My voice even sounds differentish! (Sexier IMO)
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Post by Dai-T on Jun 18, 2014 3:22:05 GMT -5
Ok I just watched it again. You don't need to mention this site in the middle leave that last it breaks your flow. I dont know any of those naruto characters you mention. You can show the characters in animation like the dbz stuff just try not to name drop. Things like that should be visual only let the viewer make the connection. The MLP thing was good. Let some of the pics do the talking and get info across as long as the right picture is up the viewer will make the connection and be pulled in more. Take out the part about your speech just be confident. they hear what they hear don't apologies. If record again try to relax have fun take the stuff off the script reword it and memorize it that way your delivery is much smoother. If you want to make fun of your speech do it with the animation never say it. Naruto is an anime I figured most have seen but you're right. As for the speech, I mostly brought it up so I could give a shootout to the two guys who are also helping me with this since its my first time. I was calm during the recordings but again the speech thing is something I'm working on. Any parts in particular that should be re recorded? also I forgot who asked but one of the moderators were hoping for a shootout so that's why that's in there. Edit: I went back and began redoing parts I slurred at, and it sounds so much better. I can take critics well, but hearing you be critical about it made me somehow subconsciously slow down my words. I'm speaking so much clearer and am articulating my words. So thanks for that! Seriously it came out of nowhere and it's amazing! My voice even sounds differentish! (Sexier IMO) I will be the judge on the sexy factor. But I really was not critical of your voice I said just accept it as long as you are confident in what you are saying is all that matters.
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